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Title: The Pleasure Principle (Ten/?)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] millionstar
Pairing: Belldom, AU
Rating: NC 17 overall, to be safe
Warnings: This part: language.
Summary: Our boys are porn stars. Wait, why are you laughing?
Feedback: Makes me happier than Dominic in a shop full of sparkly belts.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse, no offense intended, this never happened, and no money is being made. 'Tis fiction, after all. Silver Star Studios and its inhabitants, however, are all mine

Big thanks to the TPP team: [livejournal.com profile] dolce_piccante, [livejournal.com profile] frolicandfall and [livejournal.com profile] myz_bee for their beta skills, feedback and general badass-ness. ;-)

Also, thanks to [livejournal.com profile] theyellow_daisy for advice on a critical detail...

Prologue | One | Two | Three | Four | Five | Six | Seven | Eight | Nine

When Carson and I make it to the door to the cramped set we're immediately turned away by one of the techs.

"Give him some privacy, guys. Mort's orders."

Mort's in there?

"You think he's okay?" Carson asks.

"No idea." What the hell is going on around here? A guy takes a nap and wakes up to words like and Superection.

I love my job.

Suddenly, dramatically, the door opens and Mort peeks out, motioning for me to come inside.

Carson grabs my waist forcefully, growling in my ear, "Details, Matthew. I want filthy details," before walking away. I swallow and enter the closed set, and Mort comes up to me immediately. He nods in Dominic's direction and rolls his eyes.

"Talk to him. He won't tell me anything. I need to know if we need to get him to hospital."

Dominic is sitting in a chair naked, his head in his hands and his cock against his hip. He's alone on his side of the room. The rest of the people on this set are standing off to the side, giggling and speaking in hushed whispers. It really does seem as though he doesn't have a single friend here at Silver Star, and that thought makes me sad for him. I make my way over to him and sit down next to him.

"You okay?"

He won't look at me but he shakes his head. "It really hurts."

"What happen-" I begin.

"They're all loving this," he whispers. "I can hear the things they're saying."

I put a hand on his arm, a wave of anger cresting inside me at the behavior of the people in the room. "I'm not loving this. Ignore them. What can I do?"

Hanging his head still, he says, "It's embarrassing, but..."

"What?"

"Even though I've never had this happen to me before... well, it's been like four hours now, and you know what the adverts say about that."

"Oh! I see." My eyes widen a little as the situation comes into focus a little clearer. "Did you, erm... did you take something?"

His eyes widen. "No! I swear I didn't. Why would I?"

"Ah."

"So, yeah," he continues, "I think I need to see a doctor."

I nod. "Okay then. Can you get dressed?"

"I'll just throw a robe on." Neither of us were aware of the fact that Mort had walked up behind us and is standing over the back of Dominic's chair with a smirk on his face. That smirk, paired with the fact that he's still being so secretive with me, is making me angry the more I think about it. I stand and walk over to the rack to retrieve a familiar leopard print robe.

"I'm taking him to hospital," I inform Mort.

"I'm coming too," he replies. "Someone from the studio should be present."

I glance at Dominic, who seems to have no objection, so we get him in his robe and leave by the side door.

_____

It shouldn't be funny; not really. Still, in a sick way, it is.

The sight of Mort and I smuggling Dominic into the emergency ward, all the time trying to hide his obvious erection with a pillow, is the height of hilarity. This is honestly something I never, ever envisioned myself doing. Life takes funny turns sometimes, doesn't it?

When the nurse comes to take Dominic back to be examined, he forgets himself and stands up without shielding his crotch. His dick is poking stiffly against his thin robe, and the nurse gazes at it appreciatively for a second.

I think Dominic just blushed. I think.

Mort and I are now alone in the waiting room. He turns to me.

"What the hell is going on here, Matthew? Any ideas?"

"That fucking HURTS!" a voice screams from the examination room. Mort sighs as the nurse comes to retrieve the two of us to help deal with her unruly patient. Once we enter the room we see Dominic lying on a bed, his cock still standing tall, and another nurse cowering in the corner.

She raises her hands at us. "All I did was take a blood sample, I swear."

I nod, smiling. "It's ok. He has a flair for the dramatic."

"The doctor will be with you shortly," she mutters as she dashes from the room, leaving us alone.

"Has this ever happened to you before, Dominic?" Mort frowns.

Dominic glares at him. "Of course not. I finished the scene, and I came, but stayed hard."

"Did you, erm, try again?" I ask.

"More times than I care to admit."

The three of us share a strained silence for the next half hour. Mort flips through a magazine while I sit at the window, and Dominic stares at the ceiling. Finally, the door opens and the doctor enters the room. He sits down in a chair and nods at Mort and I before looking at Dominic

"It's clear now what's happened. Just how long have you been taking male enhancement drugs?"

Fuck me. I want to burst out laughing, but somehow I am able to hold back.

"Do what now?" Dominic mumbles, blinking.

"You've taken too much Viagra, Mr. Howard."

There's an uncomfortable pause as the room goes silent. Eventually Dominic speaks.

"What the fuck did you just say?"

"Erm, I said that there was an excessive amount of Viagra in your bloodstream, sir," the physician stammered. "Nothing to be embarrassed about, that happens more often than you'd think, really. We see this quite often here in A&E."

"Impossible," Dominic replied calmly.

"Not impossible. Quite factual," the doctor replies easily. "It's all here in the test results."

"You don't understand. I didn't take anything. There must be some other explanation."

I can't help but think he's right. I've seen him in action enough on set to know that he has no real need for a male enhancement drug.

"He's tested regularly." Mort says quietly. "All the actors we use are. He was clean just two days ago."

The physician smiles fondly, patting Dominic on his knee. "It's going to be okay. There's no need to be embarrassed. You're lucky only four and a half hours have passed, it's totally treatable. Listen to me-"

"No," Dominic spat. "You listen to me. Do you realize who you're talking to? I guarantee you I've never in my life needed those kinds of drugs. I can get hard on command. In the time it takes you to satisfy your wife once, I'd have made her come twice already."

The doctor flushes deeply before excusing himself.

"For fuck's sake, shut the hell up and just let him treat you," Mort exclaims. "Don't be such an arsehole."

"My juice... I told you it tasted funny." Dominic mumbles, looking my way.

"What?" I interject. "What does that have to do with anything?"

Dominic's eyes are wide as he points at Mort. "Is this punishment for looking through my file? You did this to me, didn't you? You dosed me. Or did you have your lapdog," his eyes fall to me, "do it for you?"

I actually wince. That hurts a little. Lapdog? How boring. I prefer the word minion, myself.

Mort answers him calmly, coldly. "We both know that the documents you were looking for weren't in your file, so there's no need for punishment, now is there, Dominic?"

Dominic meets his stare without wavering. Mort continues:

"And, of course I didn't do this to you. I have the studio's best interest at heart, you know. I wouldn't do anything to sabotage your career. I don't have to like you to realize that you're a money maker for Silver Star."

That statement seems to have calmed him somewhat, at least until the doctor sits down beside him with a syringe. Said syringe has one of the longest, biggest needles I've ever seen on it.

I cross my legs and shift in my chair.

"What is that?" Dominic asks, suddenly. For the first time ever in his life, possibly, he looks scared.

He probably should be.

"The chemicals in your system have caused a significant amount of blood to collect in your penis. You're lucky that aspiration is the only treatment you are going to need."

"Aspiration?" Dominic frowns. "What is that?"

"I'm afraid it's going to be necessary to drain the blood from your erection, Mr. Howard," the doctor replies sweetly. He looks positivey giddy at the opportunity to stick a needle in Dominic's oversized, swollen cock.

"Oh, and one more thing."

"What?"

"It's going to hurt."

Mort clears his throat. "Right. Matthew, let's give them some privacy." He heads for the door, and I start to do the same, but suddenly Dominic grabs my arm. I glance at him and much to my surprise, I realize that he's silently pleading with me to stay with him.

The physician shrugs. "Stay if you like."

Mort looks at me. "Well? Come on, Matthew."

"Actually," I say, glancing at Dominic's hand on my arm, "I think I'll stay with him, Mort."

He nods. "Fair enough."

A nurse puts a sheet across Dominic's chest to obstruct what is coming next from our poor virgin eyes. Dominic bites his lip and rests his head on the pillow. I look down at his hand, still on my arm, and place my hand over his protectively.

"Here we go," the doctor announces.

Dominic's eyes grow impossibly wide for a moment. He gasps as the needle pierces his delicate skin...

...then he faints.

_____________

It took some convincing on my part, but in the end Dominic allows me to make sure he gets home safely. He leans on me as we ride the lift to the third floor of his building, his head resting on my shoulder. After a few seconds of that I allow my own head to tilt to the side slightly, and when I do I can smell his cologne. It's slightly sweet, like vanilla. Just as I close my eyes with the intent of basking in the moment the lift comes to a stop. Typical.

He takes the lead now, stumbing slowly to the second door on the left side of the hallway. He gets a set of keys out of his jacket pocket and fumbles with them for a few seconds before giving up and handing them to me in frustration.

"Do you mind?" he asks. "I'm still groggy."

"Sure."

"It's the bronze-colored key."

I unlock the door, smiling to myself at the sight of Dominic's unicorn keychain which I'm now holding in my hand. He steps over his threshold gingerly and turns on a small lamp. The filtered light floods the room and I can't help but eagerly drink in my surroundings.

Dominic's flat is simple, but lovely. A white leather couch rests on a rich, thick blue carpet that stretches the length of the room. There's not much furniture aside from the couch, a chair, a telly and an end table. It's clean and crisp.

There are no photos to speak of, but I squeal in delight when I see the one thing that seems to make this flat feel like a home. A silver tabby cat comes bounding down the hallway in a hurry and jumps onto the couch next to Dominic, who has sat down in an attempt to get comfortable.

"Hello, you," he whispers, stroking the cat's head lovingly.

"Beautiful!" I exclaim. "What's her name? I mean, his name?"

"Matthew, meet my lady, Boots."

I put one hand out and much to my delight Boots walks to me and jumps into my lap, purring happily.

"She's gorgeous!" I grin.

"She is," Dominic agrees. "And best of all, she won't hump your leg."

I smirk at his cheekiness.

"I need to get back. I'm due on set in an hour." I stand, feeling badly about leaving him here alone like this. "How are you feeling now?"

"The pain is better, thankfully. I still think it's silly that I can't... you know... work for a week."

I nod. "The doctor was pretty strict about that, though. You need to be cautious. Can I call someone to come sit with you? I don't like the thought of you being here alone."

"There's noone to call," he says quietly. "It's fine, Boots will keep me company."

I walk to his door and turn around to look at him one last time. He's lying back completely on his couch now, Boots curled up in a ball at his side. I bite my lip as the words escape my mouth before I can stop them.

"Can I come back and visit you maybe?" I blurt out. "I mean, would you mind?"

"Please do. I'd like that," Dominic smiles, flushing slightly. "I'd like that alot."

"See you soon, then."

Date: 2010-05-29 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] head-o-rainbows.livejournal.com
Owwwwwwwyyyyyyyyyyyyuyyyyyy! Even without a Dick that hurt to think about. Now the question is who drugged dom? Love how he is really starting to look to Matthew for support. Awww boots. Its almost like the old Sears commercial. Come see the softer side of dom.

Date: 2010-05-30 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Come see the softer side of dom.

LOL I loved that, made me smile. ;)

Thanks hon!
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Date: 2010-05-30 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
LOL yes! Poor (pretty) Jason. ;)

Funny yet strangely comforting

Then my job here is done. ;) Thanks m'dear!!

Date: 2010-05-29 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] redhours.livejournal.com
Ohh, how embarassing for dom! But who dunnit??
Ha ha, it is like true blood. Must read next chapter!!!

Date: 2010-05-30 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Whodunit indeed?

Thank you! :)

Date: 2010-05-29 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pat401.livejournal.com
Poor Dom... Loved how Matt supported him, so cute!

Please update soon!

Date: 2010-05-30 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks! More soon-ish. :)

x

Date: 2010-05-29 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenora.livejournal.com
N'awwwwwwwww

I kind of felt sorry for Dom, you know? Being so alone... He kind of reminds me of Ice Matt (not saying you're copying, not AT ALL lol) and that cat seems adorable... Animals really are something else and I love the way they pop up in your fiction ;) What a nice touch...

Carson grabs my waist forcefully, growling in my ear, "Details, Matthew. I want filthy details," before walking away. - Gotta love Carson! Well, I LOVE him, do you give him to me? *bats lashes* hehe

Amazing chapter hun, with the usual dose of sarcasm and humour but with a new great addition - a awwww inducing Matt-Dom So so cute!!!

*hugs*

Date: 2010-06-03 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
I understand completely. :) (Ahh, Ice Matt - I may need to revisit him.... miss him!)

You want Carson? You got it, babe! LOL!

Thank you sweetie, SO much!! *hugs*

Date: 2010-06-03 10:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenora.livejournal.com
=) I've been toying with the idea of revisiting those two... But when?! bah

Awwww I got him!! hehehe *hugs*

Btw I ADORE THAT ICON!!!!

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Date: 2010-05-29 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dutchweirdo.livejournal.com
Ahwwwwww......Poor Dominic. I bet he's fucking lonely, craving for someone to love him for more than just being a dick.
Seems like he's opening up to Matthew, so who knows, eh?
Laughed a lot, again, tho. Minion indeed is a lot less boring then lapdog. LOL.

Date: 2010-06-03 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
I think you're right. :)

Minion is a fantastic word. ;)

Thank you my dear.

Date: 2010-05-29 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] licklepickle.livejournal.com
Oh god! Who dosed our poor misunderstood hero? And how cute is matty and his squeeing at cats (if I wasn't so severely allergic to them I would too!).
Love love love this fic. There defo aren't enough mystery stories in my life.
Can't wait for the next bit!

Date: 2010-06-03 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
"Stay tuned next week when we join our heroes...."

Mysteries are a good thing, aren't they? :)

Thanks pickle!!!

x

(I LOVE your icons...)

Date: 2010-05-30 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dolce-piccante.livejournal.com
poor dom and his ~magical~ penis!!!

"They're all loving this," he whispers. "I can hear the things they're saying."

:,,,( dom!

not gonna lie, the needle bit made me go

:O :O :O :O!

yikes! but matt being there for dom from the moment he saw how upset dom was, and being the one who insisted that dom had to get medical help, and then walking him home<3 = awwww!

I look down at his hand, still on my arm, and place my hand over his protectively.

*happy sigh despite the needleage*

TPP!matt is such a lovely lovely boy.

He leans on me as we ride the lift to the third floor of his building, his head resting on my shoulder. After a few seconds of that I allow my own head to tilt to the side slightly, and when I do I can smell his cologne. It's slightly sweet, like vanilla.

oh god. just...the fact that you can fit sensuality in a chapter that included a medical procedure just shows how brilliant you are. guh and guh vanilla dom!

and all the little details you're revealing about dom through his belongings and apartment (like the keychain<3, the way his flat is simple and pictureless) are so interesting. i love that you're showing us his world instead of telling us. wonderful :)

"Please do. I'd like that," Dominic smiles, flushing slightly. "I'd like that alot."

gah!!! i don't know if dom is just groggy or just damn adorable but GAH<3333! adorable! the beginning of shy!dom? ;)))

well, i'm exhausted. what a chapter! viagragate ftw!!!!

*loves*

Date: 2010-06-04 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
You spoil me, and I love you for it! :)

oh god. just...the fact that you can fit sensuality in a chapter that included a medical procedure just shows how brilliant you are. guh and guh vanilla dom!

*blushes* Thank you so much, L. Means alot that you feel that way!

i love that you're showing us his world instead of telling us. wonderful :)

Thanks again - it's interesting to get a little glimpse into Dom's world... after all, he has a cat - so he can't be too bad a guy, yeah? ;)

the beginning of shy!dom? ;)))

We shall see.... ;)

*loves back*

&hearts &hearts

Date: 2010-05-30 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syntonicmemory.livejournal.com
Ha ha, it's like a murder mystery, but with penis!

I put a hand on his arm, a wave of anger cresting inside me at the behavior of the people in the room. "I'm not loving this. Ignore them. What can I do?"

Aww, that sweet protectiveness. Love it.

"No," Dominic spat. "You listen to me. Do you realize who you're talking to? I guarantee you I've never in my life needed those kinds of drugs. I can get hard on command. In the time it takes you to satisfy your wife once, I'd have made her come twice already."

Ahhh ha ha, Dramatic Queen Dom is the shit.

...smiling to myself at the sight of Dominic's unicorn keychain...

Priceless. Somehow I can totally envision Dom having one of those in real life. :P

This whole chapter was great. The only sad part is that MUSE couldn't have been the source of his male enhancement. *snicker* Since... you know...

"To administer MUSE, remove the protective cover from the MUSE applicator, stretch the penis upward to its full length, and insert the applicator stem into the urethra."

Bwahahaha! Thanks for posting that, btw! Made my day!

Can't wait for more from you. Loving this fic way too much. XD



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Date: 2010-05-30 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syntonicmemory.livejournal.com
No! MUST SEE NAO.

Date: 2010-06-04 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
LOL. Clue, porn style. ;)

Thanks so much, means alot to me that you like it so far! :)

This whole chapter was great. The only sad part is that MUSE couldn't have been the source of his male enhancement. *snicker* Since... you know...

"To administer MUSE, remove the protective cover from the MUSE applicator, stretch the penis upward to its full length, and insert the applicator stem into the urethra."


The mad thing is that it never even occurred to me to do that!!! LOL! *clueless D is clueless*

Thanks so very much. :D

x

Date: 2010-05-30 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herverylowness.livejournal.com
Ok, now that I'm back from work, i can comment on this.

Lovely! Poor Dom though, that has to really hurt. It's good though that Matt's there for him. And as for Boots, adorable! I have four kitties myself.

I like the fact that Matt's going to visit with Dom while he's out of work from his injury. And Dom blushing! Cute!

I wonder though what exactly is up with him, how could he have gotten slipped the viagra? Something in his drink?

Hmm, looking forward to the next one!

Date: 2010-06-04 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Blushing!Dom, Dom!kitty, helpful!Matt - there was alot going on this time around, huh?

The mystery deepens! ( I hope....)

Thanks as always, dear! Always appreciate your comments.

:)

Date: 2010-05-30 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deepseabed.livejournal.com
I felt sorry for Dominic. Poor arrogant boy. His pride must have been injured. :-(
Who did such a cruel thing to him???

The last scene was so sweet. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. ;-)

Date: 2010-06-04 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Indeed, poor arrogant boy. &hearts

All will be revealed in time! :)

Thank you my dear!! ;)

x

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Date: 2010-06-04 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Haha, thank you so much! :D More soon!

Date: 2010-05-30 05:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theyellow-daisy.livejournal.com
Bwhahaha! Oh Dommie. Poor poor Dommie. This made me lol and aww at the very same time, quite a few times while reading this. And, thank you for such a lovely and long update! MUCH appreciated.

As always, you do brilliant things. Thank you <3

Date: 2010-06-04 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
LOL and aww at the same time you say? This pleases me greatly!

YOU always do brilliant things too, you know. &hearts

Date: 2010-05-30 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlight-myth.livejournal.com
oh oh oh
please update soon. this fic is fantastic!!!

Date: 2010-06-04 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you my dear, so much!! More soon as I can, I promise. :)

Date: 2010-05-30 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eremite.livejournal.com
Aspiration... an unfortunate term that sounds much more fun than it actually is :(

Don't worry, Dom, it'll work again!

Date: 2010-06-04 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Well said. *squirms in seat*

Here's hoping!

Date: 2010-05-30 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stefanyeah.livejournal.com
Oh dear, poor, poor Dominic.

…

…
*giggles*

Date: 2010-06-04 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Poor little porn star. :(


LOL

Date: 2010-05-30 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myz-bee.livejournal.com
love this so much *snickers*

*filthy details matthew* ;-)

nurse gazing appreciatively

oooh! whatever was dom trying to find in his file???

and sorry...but when i read "my juice...i told you it tasted funny" my mind was nothing thinking about orange juice :$

wish i could post more comments but i'm on the cafe clock arrghh!
*huggles*

Date: 2010-06-04 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thanks mah Bee!

and sorry...but when i read "my juice...i told you it tasted funny" my mind was nothing thinking about orange juice :$

I am, clearly, shocked and appalled, I must say.








*chokes* ;)

<33333333
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Date: 2010-06-04 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
(I miss your writing.)

LOL, thanks my dearest. ;) *bows*

And no, I will never stop calling you the Pleasure Principle Overlord. Purely because your titles are both teh secks and teh funneh. XD

Then I graciously accept this new title. ;p

&hearts

Date: 2010-06-02 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Dom's such a Drama Queen! :D
But still...poor him! Hope they'll find out who has done that.

Awww.....Matt's so sweet ^^

Date: 2010-06-02 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tash-lir.livejournal.com
Dom's such a Drama Queen! :D
But still...poor him! Hope they'll find out who has done that.

Awww.....Matt's so sweet ^^

Date: 2010-06-04 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! More soon. :)

Date: 2010-06-04 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hopeandmemory.livejournal.com
teehee, my cat's name is boots, too (although he's a boy, and brown/black, but he has these little white paws... aww)!

anyway, just read this whole fic so far in one go (because museslash is better than slogging through thousands of pages of reading for my senior thesis, fml) and i'm really liking it - the humor is wonderful, and even though it's about the porn industry (which could easily turn the story rather tawdry), it's interesting to look at it as just a job, which it is, for all parties involved. and i like that they can all see the inherent ridiculousness in some of the stuff they have to do (like dressing up as a pirate hooker, rofllll), it makes it easier to relate to the characters - we all have to do silly things we're maybe not wild about (although i doubt many of us readers are porn stars, lolol). plus, it reminds me a little bit of ted's porn site on queer as folk, which is one of my favorite TV shows. :3

i'm really loving matt's voice; he's very funny and charming. dom is such a puzzling character, though! i'm wondering if there's some history between dom and mort (who, for some reason, i keep envisioning as jerry stiller, lmfao - i think that was the name of his character in zoolander?) - not necessarily sexual, but something transpired that made him untrusting of dom. curious, curious... and i can't help but be wonder about what's going on between carson and tom... hrrrrrm. can't wait to read the next bit!

ETA: poor dom, having to have his junk aspirated! D: man, i remember when they had to do that to jason on true blood. i don't even have those parts, and this scene still made me cross my legs uncomfortably, lolol. poor thing, no wonder he passed out.
Edited Date: 2010-06-04 12:29 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-06-04 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Your comment is amazing, and I gotta say, humbling.

it's interesting to look at it as just a job, which it is, for all parties involved. and i like that they can all see the inherent ridiculousness in some of the stuff they have to do (like dressing up as a pirate hooker, rofllll), it makes it easier to relate to the characters

And that is what I've been striving for with this, so to have it pointed out to me that way makes me stupidly happy. Thank you so much for that!

Dom/Mort... Carson/Tom... well, we shall see. ;) (Don't you hate it when people say that?)

Seriously, you've made my night here, I can't thank you enough. :)

x

Date: 2010-07-06 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frisky-biscuit.livejournal.com
"No," Dominic spat. "You listen to me. Do you realize who you're talking to? I guarantee you I've never in my life needed those kinds of drugs. I can get hard on command. In the time it takes you to satisfy your wife once, I'd have made her come twice already."


What a line!! I just couldn't pass that up, but I've got to scoot back up there and read the rest. kthnxbai.

Date: 2010-07-12 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rowanfaire.livejournal.com
I honestly giggled my way through the greater part of this chapter. I loved this plot twist, loved even better the way you wrote it. It's crisp and funny and written with a deft hand. Perfection.

"It's ok. He has a flair for the dramatic." *snort*

And, dammit, I knew you'd do this, knew you'd end up making me feel sympathetic toward arsey Dominic. *shakes fist*

Loving this fic. :)

Date: 2010-08-05 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moz17.livejournal.com
Argh, that was painful- needles, man, don't like 'em. Poor Dommeh. But it WAS also sort of funny... ;)

And its nice to see this other side to Dom and Matt reaching out to him. x

Date: 2010-11-26 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Oh myyyyyyyyyy gooood, poor Dommybear! :(( I wonder who drugged him. Another thing which is quite sad is that he doesn't have friends in the studio beside Matt. At least Boots can comfort him a little. :)

"Can I come back and visit you maybe?" I blurt out. "I mean, would you mind?"

"Please do. I'd like that," Dominic smiles, flushing slightly. "I'd like that alot."


N'awwww! <3 Can I have them for Christmas? :D

Date: 2012-05-10 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liamuse.livejournal.com
Ow. =D

It's so sad to see everybody laughting at Dominic. It really looks like there's not a single person who likes him. I'm starting to change my opinion. Dom actually looks like a really lonely boy.

And he acts nice to Matt. I don't know... I hope that it's not another mask or something.

I can't help but wonder who did that to him...

Date: 2013-11-07 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamar elmensdorp-lijzenga (from livejournal.com)
Oh, I knew someone spiked his funny tasting orange juice! The question remains who? And was it supposed to be for Dom, since he wasn't in his own dressing room? The plot thickens :).

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