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Title: The Pleasure Principle (Twenty-Three/?)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] millionstar
Pairing: Belldom, AU
Rating: NC 17 overall, to be safe
Warnings: This part: smut. I can't stress that enough.
Summary: Our boys are porn stars. Wait, why are you laughing?
Feedback: Is lovely, if you're so inclined. :)
Archive: Links only.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse, no offense intended, this never happened, and no money is being made. 'Tis fiction, after all. Silver Star Studios and its inhabitants, however, are all mine. Eternal thanks to [livejournal.com profile] dolce_piccante, [livejournal.com profile] myz_bee & [livejournal.com profile] captivemuse for support general badassness. <3

Prologue | One | Two | Three | Four | Five | Six | Seven | Eight | Nine | Ten | Eleven | Twelve | Thirteen | Fourteen-a | Fourteen-b | Fifteen | Sixteen | Seventeen | Eighteen | Nineteen | Twenty | Twenty-One | Twenty-Two

"Dirty whore."

One of my eyes opens part way, my surroundings coming into focus slowly. I stretch, turning over to face Dominic. It's very early, and I'm not quite awake yet, but I do know that unless I'm quite mistaken he's just called me a dirty whore.

Of course I don't mind. Just unexpected, is all.

Oh wait, he's not done it seems.

"Been a bad boy, officer," he mutters, his left leg kicking out abruptly. He licks his lips, sighing as he falls into a deeper sleep and I continue to grin like an idiot. I burrow into the bed, not ready to get up yet as a glance tells me that it's barely light outside. Dominic's bed is warm and comfortable, and I can feel the heat radiating off his skin as I scoot even closer to him.

My cheeks hurt from smiling so hard. Still, I can't help but reach out with one hand and gently reach out for him. Lying next to him should be enough, but it's not. I don't want to wake him, though, so I slowly lower my hand until it's resting against the center of his chest. I watch as it rises and falls in time with his deep breaths, his heart beating beneath my touch.

"Hey, baby. Come here often?"

I have to bite my lip to keep from bursting out in laughter again.

"Would you like to? Bend over."

It seems he's still full of surprises. I like it, though. I like that he wasn't what I initially thought he was. Digging deeper to learn even more about him sounds like something I may get the chance to do and I'm relishing the opportunity.

I'm still not close enough. Carefully I slide closer, curling my arm around his head without touching him, while still capturing his heartbeat with my other hand. I lean in, burying my nose in the blond hair that's spilling against the pillow. It's soft and smells like mangoes and is officially the most intoxicating scent in the history of scents on this planet.

"Touch me."

I snicker as he sighs adorably again. This is more entertaining than it probably should be.

"Wassso funny?" he mutters, a sleepy smile playing at his lips.

"Sorry," I explain, "you've been talking in your sleep."

"Wasn't just now." His eyes flutter open slowly and he turns his head, the smile blossoming into a million-watt grin dripping with happiness. One of his warm hands covers mine on his chest and pushes it down his body. "Touch me, Matthew."

It's damn shameful that I haven't noticed before now that he is, in fact, hard and ready to be touched, but I've been so taken with studying his face and upper body while he slept that I didn't look further south. His hand guides my own until I feel soft hair between my fingertips. Dominic lets go of my hand and sighs again as I drag one fingertip along the length of his cock.

"Tell me," he whispers, "tell me how I feel."

I place a kiss to the top of his head and let my lips drift to his ear.

"Hot." I rub my thumb against his shaft, tracing it, Dominic hissing.

"Soft." I whisper, slowly wrapping my fingers around his cock. "I wonder," I breathe, squeezing him lightly, his eyes boring into my own, "just how you like it, Dominic?"

"W-what?"

"When you touch yourself." I squeeze him tighter. "Depends, though, doesn't it? I mean, I know that sometimes I just want to rub one out as quickly as I can. Then, some other times," I tug him once, revelling in the gasp that escapes his lips, "I want it to last. No," I correct myself as I stroke him again, "I fucking need it to last."

He whines and purrs beneath my touch as I continue to assault his ears with my words.

"I think you want it to last, don't you, Dominic?" I kiss his ear.

"Yes," he moans, "fuck, yes."

I can't believe that he's giving me free reign over his body this way.

"Keep talking," he whispers, his legs falling open even farther. He closes his eyes and reaches above his head to take hold of my other hand. I lean up and place a quick kiss to his knuckles before returning my attention to the large, hard cock in my hand.

"So thick," I continue, jerking him painfully slowly. "Big. I almost need both hands to wank you properly, don't I?"

Dominic moans in response, his eyes boring into mine while he squeezes my hand.

"I love it," I whisper, turning my attention to his leaking slit. My mouth waters at the feel of the small bead of liquid that I just collected on my thumb; the urge to bring it to my lips is a very real one, but I don't give in to it. Instead I release his cock and smear the moisture along his plump bottom lip.

Without hesitation his tongue laps it up eagerly.

"Very good," I murmur.

"Hmm," he smiles, "for you, yes."

"Not done with you yet, though." I lick my palm and grasp his length again, this time a bit more forcefully than before, and give him a few sharp pulls. "No. Won't be done with you till I see your toes curl. Till you scream my name. Till you make a mess all over my hand. Dominic"

I keep talking to him, urging him on, but for some reason, out of nowhere, I'm reminded of what we do for a living. More specifically, the fact that once we go back to the real world, there will, in fact, be other men touching his cock, fucking him, sucking him off, on a daily basis. The thought, frankly, is a sobering one.

And, I don't like it at all.

Why do I feel this sense of possession already when it comes to him? I shake my head, forcing myself to push it aside. We have to come crashing back down to earth eventually, after all. There's time to deal with that later.

He's begun to move of his own accord, his hips thrusting up to meet my strokes. The dents in his hips are calling to me to give them a good biting, but I remind myself that hopefully there'll be time for that later.

"Mmm," I groan, "can feel you throbbing. Pulsing. Look at you, fucking my fist."

"Lube, hurry," he pants, "slick up your hand. Want it wet. Oh, God."

I can see the bottle beside him on the bed, so I only have to relinquish my hold on his cock for a moment to grab it. With one fingertip I pop the lid off intending to pour it into my hand, but I have a better idea.

Dominic's cock is twitching between his legs, and instinctively I let the lube drip slowly onto his length. It slides down his shaft and he squirms at the sensation. I repeat the motion, watching, fascinated as the lube pools at his balls.

"Please," he groans, his head thrashing against his pillow, "touch me." He bucks his hips, his free hand fisting in the sheets, the other gripping my own so tightly it hurts.

I do, using my fingertips to massage the liquid into his sack, Dominic jumping out of his skin when I do. "Ooh, do it again..."

"Again?" I inquire, cradling them in my hand, reeling at the sheer weight, heat and feel of them, "you like that? Your balls in my hand like this?"

"Fuck, your voice," he gasps as I continue to fondle the slickened skin.

"You're trembling, Dominic," I whisper. He is; his stomach muscles are contracting deliciously and there's a thin sheen of sweat materializing on his chest. I lean in, kissing his shoulder, my lips sliding against the dampened skin. "Are you ready to come? Or do you like being teased?"

"I. I wanna come-" he pants, twisting his hips. "Please."

And then I'm wanking him with firm, tight strokes. I wish, again, that you could see him; the way he thrashes against the white sheets as he moves to meet my fist, the moans that escape his open mouth. His hair is plastered to his forehead now, the blond strands dark and wet. The sounds of wet skin on skin fill the room, a pleasantly filthy soundtrack that cuts into the early morning darkness.

"Tighter, grip me tighter," he blurts out, arching his back.

I oblige him and he cries out gorgeously when I do, his hips pistoning faster and faster. My own cock is pressing into his side and I want nothing more than to grind against him and find my own release, but no. The chance to study him so closely while he comes supercedes all other things right now.

Impulsively I lower my face and kiss him, his hold on my hand now officially painful. His lips tremble beneath my own, our tongues sliding together sloppily, yet perfectly.

"Matthew," he gasps.

"Yeah?" I reply, jerking him as hard as I can. I lick the corner of his mouth wantonly.

"Close. C-can I come?"

"You may, Dominic," I reply, nuzzling our noses together.

When he comes, it's something to behold. The look in his eyes, paired with the sounds that leave his mouth, overwhelms me. He shoots all over my hand, thick and wet, and I milk him for every drop I can as though I'll earn a badge of honor in doing so.

He stills eventually, and it's only then that I release his spent cock and pad into the bathroom to wash my hands. I douse a washcloth with warm water and hurry back to the bed. Dominic is spent, a smile on his face, his legs spread wide as he recovers, his chest still heaving. Gingerly I clean him up, toss the cloth aside and lie down next to him again.

"Time is it?" he says quietly, reaching for me.

"Early," I reply, allowing him to pull me close. "Go back to sleep."

"Not yet," he sings, off-key, a smile on his sleepy face.

I giggle as he covers his body with my own. "Why?"

I hiss when his hand grasps my cock.

"Your turn, gorgeous," he whispers into my ear before sliding down my body.

The second time I wake that morning the sunlight is filtering through the window and a white cat is perched on the bed staring at me. I reach for Dominic but he's nowhere to be found, much to my dismay. I fall back onto the pillows with a groan, shielding my eyes from the sun.

"Someone's grumpy," I hear him quip, and again, I can see the smile in his words without looking at him. When I do open my eyes though, he's naked before me, a tray in his hand. He places it on the nightstand and climbs back into bed with me. I turn into his embrace happily.

"Mmm, tired," I whine, "you sucked me into oblivion earlier, you beast."

Dominic laughs. "Just giving as good as I got."

I open my eyes and stare into grey ones. "Best morning ever," I reply solemnly, Dominic smiling as he kisses me. "Even if you did wear me out," I tease.

"Well, I come bearing breakfast in bed, will that make up for it?" He sits up and reaches for the tray and it's then that I burst into hysterical laughter. Dominic rolls his eyes and crosses his arms at my reaction to his breakfast of choice for us. "I know, I know. Go on, let it out," he grumbles.

"Oh, God," I gasp, "forgive me. I just... I love it!"

Dominic Howard, badass porn star, man about town, cat owner, eats Happy Cocoa Stars.

What? You've never heard of them? Shit, you've got to find them, they're only the best cereal in the history of breakfast cereals! Sure they're marketed at five year old kids, but hey, they're tasty as fuck.

"I've not eaten those in years," I grin, wiping my eyes.

"What can I say?" he winks as he passes me a bowl, "I'm just a big kid at heart. Well. A big kid who works in porn. Oh, you know what I mean."

We eat our Happy Cocoa Stars in a companionable, crunch-filled few minutes. I'm buzzing, though. Buzzing with excitement at being here with him, at what we shared last night, at the fact that I'm eating cereal in his bed. I watch as Boots bats a stray piece of cereal across the bed, only to stalk it and jump on it playfully.

"I gotta admit, I'm so glad you came back from the convention early," I blurt out.

"Me too," he replies, flashing me that million-watt grin of his. "I wasn't kidding when I said I thought about you the whole time, you know. It was nice to get to know Carson a little better, though. He's really an amazing guy, I can see why you're so close to him."

"Just be glad he didn't get drunk while you were there," I laugh, "he's a weepy drunk."

"Believe me, I learned that the hard way!"

"Oh no!"

"It was funny, in a way. On the third night he started telling me about Tom and I think he just got to missing his guy. We were having dinner together and next thing I knew he was downing mimosas like nobody's business!"

"Carson does like his Mimosas," I agree, "and his Screaming Orgasms too."

"I almost didn't get him back to the hotel room, he's a big guy! I gave a waiter named Leo some cash to help me get him to the fifth floor. All night he cried in the bathroom while singing 'You Shook Me All Night Long.' " Dominic groans.

"That's their... song. Heard it blasting out of Tom's room one day when I came home early, then heard Carson moaning Tom's name."

"No way," Dominic gasps, eyes wide.

I shudder at the memory. "Way. I ran like hell."

The two of us finish our cereal, and I try to take the dishes into the kitchen, but Dominic won't have it. He orders me to get comfortable and gives me a prime view of his naked arse as he walks away, Boots trotting behind him. I can hear the unmistakable sound of cat food being poured into a dish and Dominic sweetly referring to Boots as "sweet girl". When he comes back he closes the bedroom door and looks at me quizically.

"Do you have to go to Silver Star today?"

"No, I have the day off. You?"

"Same here, I'm off today." He walks over to his window and turns to me again. "Do you have plans?" he whispers.

"No,"I reply, swallowing. "Oh, do you have plans? I can go, I'm sorry! I didn't think!"

"Don't you fucking move," he begs softly. "Please." He closes his blinds and pulls the curtain closed, the darkness enveloping the room again. Dominic gets back in bed and I turn onto my side, facing him.

"Stay with me today?"

I nod, smiling. "Yeah. I'd like that."

"Although, I understand if you need to check in on Lou."

"Lou has asked me to leave him be. Of course, I've no intention of doing that, but I'll give him one day to himself. Tomorrow, though, all bets are off."

"You really love them," he smiles, brushing the hair from my eyes.

"I do. Completely. I may not understand what Mort is up to, but I'm always going to love him. But for now," I turn over, pulling him close, covering my body with his own, "it's just you and me. Today I just want to be here with you; just one day. Let's worry about other people tomorrow." I kiss him softly.

"What other people?" he breathes, kissing me back.

Wrapped in his arms, as well as his soft sheets, I have to agree with him.

What other people?
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Date: 2011-01-27 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dolce-piccante.livejournal.com
I'M SO OVERWHELMED WITH HAPPY RIGHT NOW! :D

i ADORE dom sleep (dirty) talking. it's just adorable, and then the way you segued into one of the hottest HJs of all time is just masterful!!

His eyes flutter open slowly and he turns his head, the smile blossoming into a million-watt grin dripping with happiness.

omg tpp!dom is so cute! <333

Instead I release his cock and smear the moisture along his plump bottom lip.

Without hesitation his tongue laps it up eagerly.

"Very good," I murmur.

"Hmm," he smiles, "for you, yes."


omg those dirty boys!! but it's so fucking hot i'm like *fans self* also, you wrote it beautifully lol like your descriptive words chosen, i mean. so it's hot -and- classy haaha

"No. Won't be done with you till I see your toes curl. Till you scream my name. Till you make a mess all over my hand. Dominic"

I keep talking to him, urging him on, but for some reason, out of nowhere, I'm reminded of what we do for a living.


another transition i love. the bolded bit is obviously scorchingly hot when imagined being said from matt to dom while giving him a hand ;) but then to have matt have a little moment of realism in the midst of all this sexual glory is so human. from what i've read about porn stars, they have such long shoots/ridiculous situations that they don't equate their job with sex. it's a job. but still, i get why matt would be a LITTLE concerned lol. i have high hopes for them tho <3

ok, outrageously long quote:

Dominic's cock is twitching between his legs, and instinctively I let the lube drip slowly onto his length. It slides down his shaft and he squirms at the sensation. I repeat the motion, watching, fascinated as the lube pools at his balls.

"Please," he groans, his head thrashing against his pillow, "touch me." He bucks his hips, his free hand fisting in the sheets, the other gripping my own so tightly it hurts.

I do, using my fingertips to massage the liquid into his sack, Dominic jumping out of his skin when I do. "Ooh, do it again..."

"Again?" I inquire, cradling them in my hand, reeling at the sheer weight, heat and feel of them, "you like that? Your balls in my hand like this?"


you know i love me a squirming dom, and this is just....:O. i think my reaction of: "uhgiqjreeeek" on msn when you first sent me this says it all. i love dom's balls, i love his balls in matt's hand, i love him being teased. it's just outrageous lol and this is a passage that's going to stay with me for a long, long time <3

yumyum cereal times!

carson loving mimosas and getting all drunk/chatting about tom is so cute. he's the funniest original character! and i agree with dom that i get why matt likes him so much.

I can hear the unmistakable sound of cat food being poured into a dish and Dominic sweetly referring to Boots as "sweet girl"

d'awwwww!!!!

okay, i've used my !!!!! quota for tonight lol i'm so in love with this fic. this might be my fav chapter so far, but it's so hard to choose!

lov eyou sweet booboo!! fantastic writing!!

Date: 2011-01-28 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you so much sweet booboo. Your support helps me to keep this going and I can't thank you enough for it.

i love dom's balls, i love his balls in matt's hand, i love him being teased. it's just outrageous lol and this is a passage that's going to stay with me for a long, long time <3

Haha I know you do! ;) And I try to oblige as often as I can haha. Thank you so much, for everything you do for me. Means so so much! Thank you for an amazing comment!!!

<333

Date: 2011-01-27 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] staticoma.livejournal.com
Unnngghh. That handjob scene was niiiice. I must admit I'm much more fond of handjob scenes than blowjobs and that one was just...yeah. Unf.

And just. THESE TWO ARE SO CUTE. The way Matt describes Dom is so adorable. <3 And the little bit about Tom and Carson, heee. God, I just love this story so much and I'm so glad to see it again. *hugs*

Date: 2011-01-28 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm not really used to writing HJs so that makes me feel a lot better, actually.

Thank you so much, K. I appreciate it!

<3

Date: 2011-01-27 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfyne.livejournal.com
God, that was so unbelievably hot! :o :o Always had a thing for handjobs like that... ahem.

"I love it," I whisper, turning my attention to his leaking slit. My mouth waters at the feel of the small bead of liquid that I just collected on my thumb; the urge to bring it to my lips is a very real one, but I don't give in to it. Instead I release his cock and smear the moisture along his plump bottom lip.

Um. How about YES? Seriously.

And god, this whole affair is so going to complicate things at work. I wonder if they'll both be able to handle seeing one another paired with other guys now. Looks like Matt won't.

I can't wait for more, I love this story so fucking much! <333

Date: 2011-01-31 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, Alex - I appreciate it more than you know!

We'll see how our boys fare - sooner rather than later, too. ;)

You are a treasure, thank you!!

<3

Date: 2011-01-27 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-shayunkn.livejournal.com
I'm not even going to lie to you, D.

I read this, and I SERIOUSLY... not even lying... had to go take a shower.

Now I'm back and I reread a few lines and am once again... blown the hell away at how amazingly talented you are.

Hhhhooooottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt. (not as hot as you, but whatevs)

so, so, so looking forward to the next part! <3<3<3<3

*scrolls up and rereads once more*

Date: 2011-01-31 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
I read this, and I SERIOUSLY... not even lying... had to go take a shower.

This is an amazing comment, girl. :O And I love you loads for being so supportive and for using that icon..... ;)

<333

Date: 2011-01-27 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessica-1985.livejournal.com
I don't think I've ever replied to this story before and if not I apologize. I can't get the image of the boys as porn stars out of my head! I love the fact that Dom is so open with Matt now, when at the beginning he was an arrogant asshole. I like the change in him and I owe that to Matt. Love the writing =)

Date: 2011-01-31 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Nothing to apologize for, seriously. :) Thank you, though, for letting me know that you like TPP, I really do appreciate it haha!

:)

Date: 2011-01-27 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theyellow-daisy.livejournal.com
Without hesitation his tongue laps it up eagerly.

"Very good," I murmur.


GOD YES! Yes! Yes! For the love of all things, YES!

I let the lube drip slowly onto his length. It slides down his shaft and he squirms at the sensation.

I love that image with all my fangirly heart and then some. Could it possibly get any hotter then that?

Evening made, nuff said! I'm so pleased you got this done. You and these boys make me a very happy girl. Thank you!

Edited Date: 2011-01-27 03:59 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-02-01 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, sweet wifey, means alot to me that you enjoyed it so much. You make ME a very happy girl.

<333

Date: 2011-01-27 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herverylowness.livejournal.com
Aww, sweetness! Tom and Carson are just too cute! And i expect Matt and Dom to spend the whole day in bed together.

Date: 2011-02-01 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you! I do love Tom and Carson so so much!

I think they did, haha!

Date: 2011-01-27 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheerpoetry.livejournal.com
IT'S BAAAACK!
I swear, I went through Son of a Preacher Man while waiting for this. While I absolutely adored it, I missed THIS!

They're just so, so perfect together. Beautiful and sweet and they bring out really wonderful things in each other. ♥ ♥

Oh, and this:
It's soft and smells like mangoes and is officially the most intoxicating scent in the history of scents on this planet.
I...can't even imagine how good he smells. And I have every confidence that it would be positively addictive. *sigh*

SO thrilled to see this! You absolutely made my night! :D

Date: 2011-02-01 01:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
You blew my mind with this comment. I just... *shakes head* ... find it hard to believe that my little fic is capable of affecting others like this. I appreciate it more than I can say!

Thank you so much. :)

Date: 2011-01-27 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myz-bee.livejournal.com
SEXY AS FUCK!!!

extra rations of rum for you captain ;-)

<3333

Date: 2011-02-01 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you Admiral!

Extra rum rations will come in handy for our trip to the BINH. I'm sure you got the memo...

<333

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Date: 2011-01-27 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibichi15.livejournal.com
ohhh i love this story so much hun :) these two are too sweet (and hot) together! :D

When he comes, it's something to behold. The look in his eyes, paired with the sounds that leave his mouth, overwhelms me.

I just really liked that line a lot <3 Thanks so much for this!

Date: 2011-02-01 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you so much!! <333 I appreciate it more than you know haha! I have an update of yours to catch up on tonight! :D

<3

Date: 2011-01-27 05:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stefanyeah.livejournal.com
Good morniiiing! XD
My bed's warm and comfortable, too. The world outside isn't. :(

This is a lovely chapter. They're so cute, and hot, together.

Date: 2011-02-01 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Bah!! It's always so much warmer in bed! :(

Thank you so much Stef!

<3

Date: 2011-01-27 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kenitafunk.livejournal.com
that was so sweet and hot, just perfect!!

Date: 2011-02-01 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you, so much! :)

Date: 2011-01-27 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ballpointcrazy.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness, this was just so unbelievably delicious and smokin'. Dom is so adorable and Matt saying all those naughty things... *blushes* WOOO <3 <3 <3

Also, I adored this so much:

I'm still not close enough. Carefully I slide closer, curling my arm around his head without touching him, while still capturing his heartbeat with my other hand. I lean in, burying my nose in the blond hair that's spilling against the pillow. It's soft and smells like mangoes and is officially the most intoxicating scent in the history of scents on this planet.

Amazing job, as always!!! <3

Date: 2011-02-01 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, L!!! *bows to your eternal greatness*

<333 *ADORES*

Date: 2011-01-27 07:52 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] easilyglorious.livejournal.com
Death by BellDom, seriously!!!

Who knew handjobs can be so... hotttttttttttt? This was increadible, dirty talk and hand action, perfect combination, especially when it's Bells' voice and his hand doing the action... Jesus!

I don't smoke, but I feel like I should light up one, after this...

Beautiful as always, and sexy as hell!
xD

Date: 2011-02-01 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Bells' voice.... ugh, believe me - I wrote this the way I did out of pure selfishness haha. As much as I adore Dominic, Matthew just hits me where I live, and the thought of him talking to his lover that way was too good to ignore. I'm so pleased you liked it!

*lights one up* ;)

Thank you love!!!

<3

Date: 2011-01-27 10:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Have just melted into a puddle. i do hope you're proud of yourself.

Date: 2011-02-01 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
I'm sorry? Haha! Thank you!!!

Date: 2011-01-27 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistake-arrest.livejournal.com
Oh, those two! <33 this was pretty smoking HOT, goddamnit :O UNF! I LOOOOVED the handjob and the lubeness especially... mm. Yeah. Haha.

Happy chapter is happy! This was gorgeous <3

Date: 2011-02-01 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
I LOOOOVED the handjob and the lubeness especially...

Good!!! I did too, kinda!! :D

Thank you lovely!! <3

Date: 2011-01-27 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlight-myth.livejournal.com
Dirty talk, handjobs and the contrasting adorableness ticks all of my boxes! It's just so beautiful to read the contrasting nature they portray. With all the filthy smut they manage to be such darlings with an awkward or cheeky adorable side.

You know, I'm really really happy that you're writing this from Matthew's POV because being a Dom!girl and reading all those stunning descriptions is like the best thing ever! Your writing is the best thing ever! And Tom and Carson are just too cute for words.

I'm reminded of what we do for a living. More specifically, the fact that once we go back to the real world, there will, in fact, be other men touching his cock, fucking him, sucking him off, on a daily basis. The thought, frankly, is a sobering one.

And, I don't like it at all.


Now there's something that's been in my mind for sometime. Their profession coming in the way...

Anyways, I don't want to dwell on that and ruin the awesomeness of this chapter! Simply beautiful, D! *hugs and more hugs* ♥

Date: 2011-02-01 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Woah, Myth, thank you so much! :O Such a kind and amazing comment, I really appreciate it!

I'm glad you liked my descriptions of Dominic, as a Matt girl I always worry I'm not giving our Drummer the props he deserves! :)

Thank you thank you thank you!

<3

Date: 2011-01-27 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ophelia1971.livejournal.com
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

That was DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE-LICIOUS!

Hilarious sleepy-talking Dom, coupled with sensual, yet HAWT, morning sex.

*chants is a VERY happy camper* :-DDDDD

*sighs happily*

Date: 2011-02-01 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
If you're happy then I certainly am! Mission accomplished! :D

<3

Date: 2011-01-27 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] head-o-rainbows.livejournal.com
Oh smexy times YAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2011-02-01 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Glad you liked girl!!

Date: 2011-01-27 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashamedbliss.livejournal.com
GOD DOM AND HIS TALKING OMG.

and then the "touch me" bit, guhhh. You always get the right amount of sexy anf fluffy and it FLOORS me every time, I literally have no idea what to say, omg.

*flails* I am SOOO happy for these two, I hope nothing bad comes between them O.O

*hugs* ♥

Date: 2011-02-01 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you so so much, girl! I really appreciate it! And btw, I haven't forgotten the fic you posted to the comm! I'm behind and am trying to read in order. :)

*hugs*


<3

Date: 2011-01-27 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pat401.livejournal.com
Lovely chapter! And so hot! :)

Date: 2011-02-01 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

Date: 2011-01-27 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engel-sehnsucht.livejournal.com
Fuck. Me.
Or rather, fuck Dom. ;)

It's 10 to 11 and I was about to go to bed, but I was a little too awake from endorphins from riding my hoss tonight and I thought I'd find me a lil bedtime story to read. (How old am I., six? XD) Now there's no way I'll be sleeping any time soon. XD

Jesus, that was hot! Dom sleep talking, then the HJ, and Dom licking his come off his lip and just... hnnnnnng...

Aww, Matt. :( it'll be reet with work, dear, you'll sort it out. (... I hope.)

Yeah, I love love love this so much! *hugs you and the boys*

Date: 2011-02-01 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Fuck. Me.
Or rather, fuck Dom. ;)


I was a little too awake from endorphins from riding my hoss tonight and I thought I'd find me a lil bedtime story to read. (How old am I., six? XD)

Anita, you are amazing. :D Thank you, means to much to me that you liked it! :D

*hugs back*

<3333333333333333

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From: [identity profile] engel-sehnsucht.livejournal.com - Date: 2011-02-01 07:22 am (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2011-01-27 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/___orange/
I keep talking to him, urging him on, but for some reason, out of nowhere, I'm reminded of what we do for a living. More specifically, the fact that once we go back to the real world, there will, in fact, be other men touching his cock, fucking him, sucking him off, on a daily basis. The thought, frankly, is a sobering one.

And, I don't like it at all.


Matt's jealous?! I can't wait until Dominic has a viewing party with The Sperminator.

Date: 2011-02-01 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Actually, the viewing party for Cockspotting will be up first. In my mind, at least.

Date: 2011-01-31 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ms-belle10.livejournal.com
What other people?

Oh, that last line...it just sent a dagger straight through my heart! These two men have come together (no pun intended) while working together in a volatile industry...and it's such a pleasure to watch their relationship unfold.

And then there's the sex. Are you trying to kill us all? God, these two are just fantastic together...wonderful, wonderful chapter. <3 <3

Date: 2011-02-01 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
I say it every time, but it's still true - I'm so humbled that you enjoy my little fic here, believe me when I say you made my day with the Horizons update! (Which I am off to comment on as part of my mass MS catchup as soon as I can. The working world is a bitch sometimes.)

Thank you - I hope that this continues to satisfy you in future chapters! :) Thanks for the lovely comment.

<33

Date: 2011-11-23 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hesterias.livejournal.com
THIS WAS TOO CUTE, OMG. I WANNA MARRY IT. CAN I MARRY THIS STORY?

Image

Lol, I had to put that. :-)
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