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D ([personal profile] million_star) wrote2011-01-18 06:27 pm

Son Of A Preacher Man (11/?)

Title: Son Of A Preacher Man (11/?)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] millionstar
Pairing: Belldom, AU
Rating: This part, NC-17
Warnings: Language, Sudden Southern Drawls, Tight Blue Jeans.
Summary: AU Belldom, set in the Deep American South. Enough said, y'all.
Feedback: Is welcome & appreciated, if you're so inclined. :)
Archive: Links only.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse, no $$ being made, and this is fiction. Title taken lovingly from the song of the same name.
Author's note: As always, eternal thanks to my lovely, dear ladies [livejournal.com profile] dolce_piccante, [livejournal.com profile] myz_bee and [livejournal.com profile] frolicandfall for constant inspiration, love and support. BTW,[livejournal.com profile] lalalive23 is uber smexy.

And as always, HUGE thanks to my girl M, [livejournal.com profile] captivemuse for her help in all thangs Southern. Your assistance is critical and greatly appreciated, and a case of Cheerwine is headed your way, girl! <3

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The shrill ringing of Matthew's alarm clock cut through the still quiet of the morning.

The brunet groaned and reached blindly for the offending gadget, hitting the snooze button before collapsing back onto his pillow. He smiled when a warm, strong arm wound its way around his waist and pulled him close. That was something new; something that Matthew had never before experienced in his bed, but it was also one that he knew he could get used to quickly.

"Mmm, still dark out," Dominic muttered, Matthew turning to face him. "What time is it?"

"4:15," came the whispered answer, which was followed by a soft kiss to the blond's mouth.

"That's fuckin' early!"

Matthew giggled at Dominic's sudden outburst, Dominic poking his arm playfully in response. "Y'don't have to get up, y'can stay here and sleep as long as ya need."

"But," Dominic replied huskily, "ain't gonna be no fun sleepin' here alone." He bit Matthew's shoulder playfully. "Y'got a few more minutes, yeah?"

"More'n a few for you."

"Then c'mere, blue eyes."

The use of his pet name, here in his bed, in the darkened room, made Matthew tremble as the two of them laid face-to-face and kissed again. Matthew moved even closer and it was only then that he felt something pressing into his hip.

"Y'feel so fuckin' good," Matthew whispered, climbing on top of the blond, Dominic swallowing hard. Just as Matthew's lips began to kiss lightly at the blond's neck they were interrupted by a whimpering outside the bedroom door.

"Shit. Daisy needs to go out I reckon." He leaned in, kissing Dominic softly before hopping up. "Be right back."

Dominic wolf-whistled as Matthew padded away naked, the brunet giggling happily. When the door closed Dominic stretched and turned over, delighted that he could smell Matthew on his pillow; he inhaled deeply. He grinned into the fabric, biting his lip. It was a simple thing, he reckoned, to sleep in a bed - people did it all the time. But this was different.

This was Matthew's bed.

He exhaled shakily.

The door opened quietly and Matthew got back into bed, this time throwing a thin sheet over the both of them. He moved closer, covering the blond's body with his own. "Sorry bout that."

"Ain't nothin' to be sorry for," Dominic replied, rolling them. "I ain't usually up at," he glanced at the clock, "4:22 in the mornin', but ain't no place I'd rather be." Their lips met hotly, their bare legs sliding together. Dominic shifted, their cocks making delicious contact when he did. They both gasped, Matthew wide-eyed, when Dominic paused before slowly rolling his hips experimentally.

"Fuck," Matthew whispered, rocking into the blond, "don't stop."

But Dominic did stop, his brow furrowing. "But I..."

"What?"

"Am I goin' too fast?" The question came softly, Dominic stroking Matthew's shoulder with one fingertip. "I mean, I reckon it's too late to be askin' that. I just... I don't wanna... shit, I don't even know what I mean."

"Hey," Matthew replied, "stop worryin'. Yeah?" He smiled, his eyes searching Dominic's face. "Ain't no need, okay? Promise."

"'Kay," the blond smiled.

They kissed again, eager to continue what they'd started. Dominic rocked gently against Matthew's body, pleasure shooting through his form every time his cock made contact with Matthew's. Finding leverage, though, was hard, and Dominic held tightly to the brunet, intent on creating more friction as well as increasing the speed of his movements.

Strong hands wound around his back and caressed the skin there, drifting south until they were cupping Dominic's cheeks. Matthew tried to grind upward into Dominic's movements but couldn't seem to create a satisfying rhythm. He blushed, not knowing how to proceed.

"Show me?" he panted into Dominic's mouth. "Show me what to do."

Instantly the blond wrapped his arms around Matthew and turned onto his side, bringing Matthew's body with him. He gripped Matthew's ass and pulled him forward sharply, the brunet moaning as their hard, wet cocks made contact again. Dominic gave an answering thrust of his own and waited for Matthew to do the same. "Like this. Move against me."

Matthew did as instructed, his eyes fluttering shut as his cock slid against Dominic's again. Dominic gritted his teeth, wrapping one leg around Matthew's, grinding furiously.

"Fuck! Ohhh, do it again."

"L-like this?" Matthew gasped as he began to move faster. He moaned in pleasure, Dominic kissing his lips again, the bedsprings beginning to squeak with effort.

"Just like that. Faster," Dominic panted, "y'feel so good."

They moved together, increasingly faster, whispered words of instruction and desire filling the air between them. Being face to face allowed them to watch each other as they came. Dominic came first, Matthew finally getting an up close look at wide, light-filled grey eyes for a fleeting moment, until they fluttered shut in ecstacy. That, paired with the feeling of Dominic coming wet and hard against Matthew's chest was all that the brunet needed to trigger his own orgasm. He pushed Dominic over, onto his pillow, and pumped his hips even harder, the blond watching, wide-eyed, loving the look of Matthew on top of him, riding out his orgasm.

Finally, Matthew stilled, collapsing, their come-soaked fronts sliding together. Dominic held him tight, kissing his ear.

"That," Matthew panted into Dominic's mouth, sweat dripping from his brow, "was... I've never... ohhhh."

"Matthew," Dominic said quietly, his chest still heaving. The brunet looked up.

"Yeah?"

"Thank you. I," he shook his head with a bashful smile, "I love this."

"So do I," Matthew whispered, kissing his mouth lightly.

Dominic glanced at the clock. "I bet you gotta go soon, don't you?"

"Yeah, I'd better get in the shower now."

"Want some company?" Dominic teased, wiggling his eyebrows. Matthew laughed.

"If you come in there with me I'll never get to work! Be right back." The blond stretched and closed his eyes.

Once Matthew emerged from the bathroom, a cloud of sweet-smelling steam following him, Dominic forced his eyes open.

"I should go, I don't feel right bein' here when you ain't."

"Nah, it's so early, just sleep as long as ya like, yeah?" Matthew said, grabbing Stella's keys and running his hand through his freshly-washed hair. He paused, cocking his head.

Dominic's lips curled in a sleepy smile. "What?"

The brunet sat down next to Dominic and leaned down, kissing him one last time, taking his hand. "Y'look damned good in my bed, is all." Dominic inhaled the sweet scent of Matthew's soap and groaned.

"Stay."

"Can't, sorry."

"Fine," Dominic pouted, curling against his pillow, "can I call ya later on?"

"Y'better," Matthew replied with a grin, kissing Dominic's open palm gently. He released the blond's hand and stood. "Get some rest. And don't worry, I'll take Daisy with me to the store."

"Good!" Dominic said, louder than he'd intended to. Matthew raised an eyebrow, the blond backpedaling. "I just.... hell, Matty, I'm scared of her!" Walking to the door with a giggle, Matthew stopped once he'd reached it and turned around.

He couldn't help but be taken with the sight of Dominic, naked, lying in his bed, a sleepy yet sexy smile on his gorgeous face.

He didn't want to leave. But he had responsibilities; he had to.

"Talk later," he whispered, forcing the door open.

"Damn right," came Dominic's reply as he watched Matthew walk away.

As soon as the door closed Dominic turned onto his belly and got comfortable. He pulled Matthew's pillow close and held it to his chest. Eyes closed, he let his body relax as he listened to Matthew gathering Daisy, listened as they descended the steps, and listened as Stella came to life and took the two of them into town.

He had just drifted back to sleep when he heard the front door opening; he was dimly aware that he should be happy and wake up, because clearly Matthew had forgotten something. At least, he was certain to get another kiss out of it! The bedroom door opened and the sound of a sharp gasp woke Dominic up completely. He turned over, grinning, and stared into Annie Bellamy's eyes.

"Oh shit!"

Matthew's mother was holding a basket of laundry, an amused look on her face.

"Mornin', sunshine."

He scrambled; the realization that Matthew's mama had just walked in on him sleeping, naked, in her son's bed. In his haste to wrap the sheet around his body to cover himself he slid off the side of the bed, landing on his head. Luckily for him, though, he recovered quickly and was soon perched at the end of the bed, crossing his legs primly, his hands folded in his lap.

"Mornin', ma'am," he squeaked nervously.

"I didn't mean to pry, I was bringin' Matty's clean clothes up for him, sorry 'bout that!" She cocked her head suddenly, much the way Matthew had a few minutes earlier; if Dominic hadn't been so nervous he'd have found that quite sweet. "So, no tan lines, huh? I mean, I couldn't help but see just now!"

Dominic's cheeks turned purple. He thought he might actually die of embarrassment; then again, death might be better than his boyfriend's mama seeing his bare ass.

Boyfriend? Is that what he was? Dominic liked to think so already; he shook his head, forcing himself to concentrate on the situation at hand.

"I'm sorry you had to see my, I mean-"

"Please, boy. You think I ain't seen my fair share of ass? Believe me, I have!" Much to his horror, she sat down next to him on the bed, the clothes basket still in her lap. "I always wanted to try sunbathing in the nude," she began.

"Erm..."

"Mind you, I've sunbathed topless before..."

"Oh God, please stop," Dominic whispered to himself, horrified.

"Anyway!" she said brightly, standing, "I'd better get down to the shop and start breakfast! You get some rest, Dominic." She put the clothes basket on the chair in the corner and waved to the blond. "Talk to you soon!"

"Okay!" Dominic replied, much louder, again, than he'd intended to. It was only when he heard the front door shut that he fell back onto the bed with a groan, his hands over his face.

Outside, Annie Bellamy sat on the bottom step and laughed harder than she had in a long time. She had to admit that it was a little surprising that Matthew and Dominic were going as fast as they seemed to be, but she was just happy for her son - and she knew, she just knew that it was gonna be fun teasing Dominic every chance she could. He made it too damn easy.

She wiped her eyes and walked toward her car.

* * * *

Jacob patted him on the shoulder. "Matty! How'd it go? You have a good time out with Dominic last night?"

"Yeah, I did, daddy," he smiled. "A real good time!"

"I'm glad, son, real glad." The older man beamed as a customer came in the front door. He squeezed his son's shoulder with a grin and went to wait on the woman at the counter. Matthew, still daydreaming about they way he'd woken up this morning, didn't hear his mother come up behind him.

"So, does he snore?" Annie smirked.

Matthew dropped the case of Cheerwine he'd been holding.

"Mama!" he hissed, blushing fiercely.

"Okay, okay!" She held her hands up. "Ain't none of my business!"

"Mama, please."

"I was surprised to see his truck outside when I got up this mornin'."

"Oh," Matthew began, "well-"

"Listen, son," she said, smiling, "it's none of my business. You're an adult, you can do whatever you see fit. Okay? You don't owe me any explanations. Ever." She looked up. "Ah, I need to talk to your daddy, be right back."

Impulsively, Matthew hugged her suddenly, tightly. "Love you, mama."

"Love you more, baby," she smiled.

He leaned down, picking up the bottles, placing them on the shelves. He heard his father shout "What?" and raised his head curiously. He could see his mother whispering furiously to his father, then the two of them bursting out in giggles. Jacob actually had to pull the handkerchief from his overall pocket and wipe his eyes.

"The hell?" their son muttered.

"But wait," Annie giggled, "it gets better!" She whispered to him again and that was when the giggles turned into full-blown hysterical laughter. They both fell into the counter, their laughter carrying across the store, Annie pounding the counter top with her fist.

"Hmm. S'weird," Matthew mused with a shrug before going back to work.

[identity profile] myz-bee.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
god i wanna see dom's "eggs" sunny side up dammit!

[identity profile] hopeandmemory.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
oh jesus, girl, you are not the only one. *clutches pearls*

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[identity profile] frisky-biscuit.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
FROTTAGE! HICK BOYS! RUTTING!

EMBARRASSING PARENTAL CONVERSATIONS! BLUE EYES!

D, what can't you do I ask? Well, I know the answer to that: fuckin nothin!

"Then c'mere, blue eyes."

I swear, every single time he says that my tummy does a flip...yummmm

Dominic gave an answering thrust of his own and waited for Matthew to do the same. "Like this. Move against me."

Matthew did as instructed, his eyes fluttering shut as his cock slid against Dominic's again. Dominic gritted his teeth, wrapping one leg around Matthew's, grinding furiously.

"Fuck! Ohhh, do it again."

"L-like this?" Matthew gasped as he began to move faster. He moaned in pleasure, Dominic kissing his lips again, the bedsprings beginning to squeak with effort.

"Just like that. Faster," Dominic panted, "y'feel so good."

Well, shit.

Let's just hit every single fuckin one of my boxes, okay? Frottage, Dominiant Dom, Dirty talk.

Hell, I need a SHOWER.

"Good!" Dominic said, louder than he'd intended to. Matthew raised an eyebrow, the blond backpedaling. "I just.... hell, Matty, I'm scared of her!"

That. is. the. CUTEST. thing. EVAR.

Just...c'mere Dom, let me hide you in between my ample bosoms....I'll keep you safe from that mean ol puppy...haha. DAYUM.

I would quote the ENTIRE exchange with Dom and Annie, but...let me just say I LOVED it!

You, my sistah, are MASTERFUL.

Hot damn, I need a sammich.
Edited 2011-01-18 23:58 (UTC)

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-20 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
I love this comment like burning... you are so integral to this fic's existence I can't even stand it, and I thank you for all you do and all you are.

ILU sis. Loads.

<3

[identity profile] staticoma.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
MATT STOP BEING SO CUTE only don't.

These two are so lovely, it just...the warmth and the adorableness and all the characters in this story are lovely. Though I have a suspicion that Matt's parents were laughing at him. Poor guy, hahaha.

Love love love this. <3 I get so happy everytime you update, miss.

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-23 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
Ahh, thank you, I'm so happy you're still liking these boys. :)

<3

(And I love it when you call me Miss!)

[identity profile] elfyne.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
OMG honey that was amazing! *wipes tears* Matt's mum is just awesome, teasing Dom like that. :D I kept giggling the whole time!

Oh, and Matt watching Dom lying in his bed, such a lovely image... <3

Damn, I love this story so muuuuuch!

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-25 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, means alot to me that you enjoyed it, girl!

Matt's mama is kinda awesome. ;)
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[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-25 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much girl!! :D

[identity profile] ballpointcrazy.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
I can't help but flail and squee whenever I see you update this! I just love it so damn much! Matt and Dom are so gosh darn cute in this, I can't handle it! <3
Hehe, I have to admit I was laughing obnoxiously loud during the last bit!

This: In his haste to wrap the sheet around his body to cover himself he slid off the side of the bed, landing on his head. Luckily for him, though, he recovered quickly and was soon perched at the end of the bed, crossing his legs primly, his hands folded in his lap.

SO CUTE. AHHH! :D :D :D

And: "So, no tan lines, huh? I mean, I couldn't help but see just now!"

HAHAHAHA! OMG! <3 <3

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-25 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
You are so so sweet, you have no idea. Thank you so much girl - making y'all laugh is my objective, so I'm pleased that worked! :D

Thanks sweetie!! <333

[identity profile] lalalive23.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
HIIICCK FIIIIIICCCCCCCC
Gurl. I love this story. They are just....shit they are so hot with the accent and the GRINDING and the manners. *calms down*

OK.

The use of his pet name, here in his bed, in the darkened room, made Matthew tremble as the two of them laid face-to-face and kissed again.
Omg. Just...omg. Such a real reaction.

"Show me?" he panted into Dominic's mouth. "Show me what to do."

Instantly the blond wrapped his arms around Matthew and turned onto his side, bringing Matthew's body with him. He gripped Matthew's ass and pulled him forward sharply, the brunet moaning as their hard, wet cocks made contact again.

O________________________O Fuck me. 1. I love how Matthew openly admits his desire for instruction. 2. Dominic responds so well. 3. THIS RELATIONSHIP IS FULL OF COMMUNICATION RIGHT NOW AND I AM SPEWING CONFETTI FROM THE TIPS OF MY FINGERS!

He scrambled; the realization that Matthew's mama had just walked in on him sleeping, naked, in her son's bed. In his haste to wrap the sheet around his body to cover himself he slid off the side of the bed, landing on his head. Luckily for him, though, he recovered quickly and was soon perched at the end of the bed, crossing his legs primly, his hands folded in his lap.

"Mornin', ma'am," he squeaked nervously.

LOL LOL LOL FOR DAYS. That whole scene was absolutely incredible.

"Mind you, I've sunbathed topless before..."

"Oh God, please stop," Dominic whispered to himself, horrified.

LOL I can't even. I love that she says this and idk if she's being serious, or just winding him up, but it's perfect. TBH, she is totes the kind of woman who would sunbathe naked. WOMAN HAS THE RIGHT!

And then she goes and tells his daddy all about what she found in the bedroom. Fucking amazing. I love how you have found a way to balance such erotic emotions, desire, and pron, with amazing characters and feeling. This is just a fabulous story. I want them to be real <33333

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-25 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
They are just....shit they are so hot with the accent and the GRINDING and the manners.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

I love how you have found a way to balance such erotic emotions, desire, and pron, with amazing characters and feeling. This is just a fabulous story. I want them to be real.

I dunno what to say to that but thank you so so much for everything!

<3

[identity profile] theyellow-daisy.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
I love these boys so dearly. They're absolutely precious, and every time we are lucky enough to get an update, it's like a wonderful present. So first of all, thank you!

their cocks making delicious contact when he did.

Yes! Yes! That bit made me squirm. You're good at that ;)

Thank you so much for another brilliant update, and the glorious southern-ness that peeks through, which you know I effn' adore. Lolz for days!

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much sweet wifey - precious is what I was going for, so I'll take it!! :D

<333

[identity profile] head-o-rainbows.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Damn you D, making me laugh. I can't breathe as it is then you have to write something like that. . Love the parents in this fic

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, sorry?? ;)

Thanks girl!!

[identity profile] chibichi15.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
EEEEEEEEEEE!!! I really love this story!!

So, no tan lines, huh? I mean, I couldn't help but see just now!

hahahaa that just made me giggle! An all-around tanned Dom... ;) All the characters just make me so happy in this.
Love this...and love you! <3

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! Trust me, I love you too!! :D

MATTY JANE + DOMMY 4 EVER!<3333

[identity profile] dolce-piccante.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
omggggg i love this fic! not only is it hot (hello humping!!!) but it's hilarious (annie walking in!!) and loving (obvs the matt/dom vibe but also matt's parents) and wonderful! i can't decide which original character is my fav, but annie's interaction with dom shot her high on that list <333 lucky lady to see those toasted bunz!!

i'm so happy these boys have found each other <3 and that we get to go along for the ride. it's just marvelous <3333

love this and you sweet d!! :D

Re: MATTY JANE + DOMMY 4 EVER!<3333

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
i can't decide which original character is my fav, but annie's interaction with dom shot her high on that list <333 lucky lady to see those toasted bunz!!

Thank you so much, booboo!! :D Toasted bunz indeed. ;)

<3

[identity profile] kaosspad.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
"So, no tan lines, huh? I mean, I couldn't help but see just now!"

OMG. I had to take a moment to laugh and breathe just like Mrs. Bellamy. Hilarious! I love her. And I love her. <3

Oh hey, Cheerwine, you elusive beast.

And yeah, grinding like that is TOTALLY one of my ticky boxes. Mmmmmmmm.

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so so much! I really appreciate it! :)

(CPine icon is the sex. Ugh...)

[identity profile] darthtofu.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 02:25 am (UTC)(link)

Matt's mom is awesome. Just sayin'.

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:37 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you bb!! :)

[identity profile] starlight-myth.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
Again, I don't see why you were nervous about this! Everything about this chapter was so light and funny. Well, except for the smut, which was smokin' HOT!!!

"Mornin', sunshine."
I love Matt's mum! I just knew she would run into a naked Dom!

"Please, boy. You think I ain't seen my fair share of ass? Believe me, I have!"
"Mind you, I've sunbathed topless before..."

*wipes tears* I laughed so hard! She was totally pulling his leg on purpose here. Poor Dom though, haha!

I so love Hick Fic!!! This made my morning and now I hope my exam goes well! *hugs* ♥

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
You're too sweet and so supportive Myth, thank you so much!!

*hugs* Thanks!!

[identity profile] end1essly.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
"So, no tan lines, huh? I mean, I couldn't help but see just now!"

&

"Please, boy. You think I ain't seen my fair share of ass? Believe me, I have!"


I laughed, for at least a couple minutes straight XD Just...yessssssss XD Sexy + Funny, you're amazing :)

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
Funny is what I'm aiming for, so thanks so much Olgs!! I appreciate it so very much! ;)

[identity profile] miss-ariake.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, what's that I see across the MS horizon? A delicious update of beautiful hick fic? Wonderfully gorgeous boys in bed written with so much smokingly hot sex, that I now need to take a shower? The most adorable parents in existence having a secret giggle about a naked Dominic in Matthew's bed, so funny and priceless that I have tears streaming down my face? The cutest couple, the sexy accents, the stunning ease at which this all blends together into fic perfection?

I believe we can summarise that my afternoon is now well and truly complete, wrapped up in a glitter bow and everything, because when an update of SOAPM appears, everything just feels right. Miss D, gurl, you gotta tell me your secrets! How DO you get to be so awesome and talented and amazing as you?

Effortless excellence, sensational ^_^

*hugs*

I have to use my blue eyes avatar for this story... that pet-name just equals so much love <3

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
How are **you** so amazing - that's what I want to know? You make me feel so so special when you comment, and to think my silly little fic makes you this happy kills me.

Thank you so so so so much.

((ICON LOVE))

[identity profile] fuckyeahmuse.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

*gasp, wheeze*

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha


Lady, I adore you for writing this fic.

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I adore YOU for commenting! :D Thanks doll!!

[identity profile] mirrormonster8.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 06:17 am (UTC)(link)
*HAPPY DANCE* This fic makes me smile so much. XD

When the door closed Dominic stretched and turned over, delighted that he could smell Matthew on his pillow; he inhaled deeply. He grinned into the fabric, biting his lip. It was a simple thing, he reckoned, to sleep in a bed - people did it all the time. But this was different.

This was Matthew's bed.

He exhaled shakily.


LOVE this, because it's so real. Being in someone's bed that way is just... ARGH, I don't have a word for it, but it makes me absolutely happy-crazy. Hugging their pillows and laying in their spot is like being in the middle of that person. It's a lovely thing to experience.

Also, I approve of the frottage. SO hard.

"Show me?" he panted into Dominic's mouth. "Show me what to do."

People seem to think asking for help/guidance/preference/permission during sex is awkward, but WOW... To me, it seems like it would just heighten the experience, make it more symbiotic. I really loved that bit, lol.

"Please, boy. You think I ain't seen my fair share of ass? Believe me, I have!" Much to his horror, she sat down next to him on the bed, the clothes basket still in her lap. "I always wanted to try sunbathing in the nude," she began.

ROFL! Gloooooorious. I love how welcoming Matty's mother is. Also, I plan to be talking about all the ass I've seen when I'm middle-aged, lol.

This has probably been said already, but I just wanted to say how fantastically you're handling writing their dialect. It's absolutely natural, never too much, never stereotypical. I hear them so much more clearly because of it, and the effect is fabulous. :)

Wonderful as usual! <3

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
You are just amazing. <3

Also, I plan to be talking about all the ass I've seen when I'm middle-aged, lol.

You and me both girl, you and me both. ;)

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment, you always make my day! :D

*hugs*

[identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 06:41 am (UTC)(link)
LOL I read this though there's a fair chance I'll be late from uni. xD I just couldn't resist! *wink*


"So, no tan lines, huh? I mean, I couldn't help but see just now!"

OMG I CAN'T BREATHE!!!!!! =)) LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL Mrs. Bellamy made my morning!

Great story, D!!! <3

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, I'm really pleased you liked it! :D
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[identity profile] easilyglorious.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
I have not laughed so hard in ages!! First Matt's mom catches a glimpse of Dom's,,. ummm crown jewels, then his parents having fun at his expense... ahh the embarrassment!!!

But ahh, dry-humping at 4 AM, now that's hot - mind you I'd wake any time for sex with Matt...

Sweet, sweet story. I adore your characters, each one really believable, and just beautifully pictured.

And your writing... damn, I could sit and read for days! Absolutely perfect!

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[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
What a thoughtful, supportive and lovely comment! Then you hit me with this:

...mind you I'd wake any time for sex with Matt...

Girl, you and me both. Unf. The mind boggles! ;)

And your writing... damn, I could sit and read for days!

Thank you so so much, truly.

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[identity profile] ophelia1971.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!1!!!111

UNF UINF UNF UNF UNF...

Right, now that that's cleared up, I can try to comment coherently.

*ahem*

The frottage JUST KILLED ME DED. AT WORK, NO LESS! That was some hot, hot, hot frottage *grins when kinks are hit* ;-)

What a fantastic chapter - the smouldering bed scene (with Matt asking how to do stuff (dear Lord, that was sexy)), the sweetness of Matt looking at Dom in his bed and telling him to stay, to the hilarity of Mrs Bellamy walking in on Dom. Their exchange made me LOL at work. Fuck, she's funny. :-DDD

So, I reckon I kinda liked this chapter darlin'.... ;-) ♥

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
So, I reckon I kinda liked this chapter darlin'.... ;-) ♥

I love it when you talk Southern haha! ;)

Thank you so much, sorry for killing you at work though!!

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[identity profile] farawisa.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 10:08 am (UTC)(link)
hilarious. just hilarious!!! loved it!

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much!

[identity profile] mistake-arrest.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, I love Matthew's mum :D

And Dom's got no tan lines, eh? I wouldn't mind him sunbathing in my backyard, then... not that I would kick him away when fully clothed, etiher :D

Those two just continue being the cutest things ever :3 a great chapter, thank you! <3

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, I like her too! :D

Dom tanning in the nude is a thing of beauty!

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[identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 12:22 pm (UTC)(link)
This was brilliant!

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!!

[identity profile] herverylowness.livejournal.com 2011-01-19 01:02 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL DYING! Matt's mother is hysterical! No tan lines! MY GODS!

[identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com 2011-01-27 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
Haha best reaction ever!! Thank you J!

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