I had a huge grin on my face while reading this juicy piece hehehe This is one of the best first persons I've ever read, and I know how difficult it is to write first person... It may seem easy but it's not. You have to put yourself into one character and sometimes write things you don't really agree in order to make it sound like it's not you telling the story.
Anyway! I love this sarcastic Matt! And even though this is a story line so so different from 17Steps, I can still see so clearly that it's your work. Also, I LOVE Thomas here hehehe Almost as much as I love Matty boy. The bond between them is so amazing to read...
And now, bring more of that diva Dom mwahahaha The whispering was phowaaarrr hehehe
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This is one of the best first persons I've ever read, and I know how difficult it is to write first person... It may seem easy but it's not. You have to put yourself into one character and sometimes write things you don't really agree in order to make it sound like it's not you telling the story.
Anyway! I love this sarcastic Matt! And even though this is a story line so so different from 17Steps, I can still see so clearly that it's your work. Also, I LOVE Thomas here hehehe Almost as much as I love Matty boy. The bond between them is so amazing to read...
And now, bring more of that diva Dom mwahahaha The whispering was phowaaarrr hehehe
*hugs you*
xxx