Okay, I've been meaning to start this fic for a while, but somehow missed it in the beginning and only now am catching up on everyone's stuff.
So, first off, I'd like to say I'm really enjoying the story so far. The characters you're building of Matt and Dom in this are fantastic. We know so little about Dom, but we get glimpses from his conversation with Matt and the scene in the hospital at the end of this chapter. I really like the slow build-up and the continuing mystery of who Dom is and how he and Matt will get together.
The scene with Monica's mum made me LOL But hey, who wouldn't continually hit on a guy like Matt if he was your daughter's piano teacher?? ;) And I don't care that he's got no arse in real life, I still would love to do what Mrs Utley did and have a grab of it. Yes please.
I will comment more on later chapters as I get to them, but thought I should at least say something now while I have a few spare minutes :) Lovely work hon *hugs*
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So, first off, I'd like to say I'm really enjoying the story so far. The characters you're building of Matt and Dom in this are fantastic. We know so little about Dom, but we get glimpses from his conversation with Matt and the scene in the hospital at the end of this chapter. I really like the slow build-up and the continuing mystery of who Dom is and how he and Matt will get together.
The scene with Monica's mum made me LOL But hey, who wouldn't continually hit on a guy like Matt if he was your daughter's piano teacher?? ;) And I don't care that he's got no arse in real life, I still would love to do what Mrs Utley did and have a grab of it. Yes please.
I will comment more on later chapters as I get to them, but thought I should at least say something now while I have a few spare minutes :) Lovely work hon *hugs*