Oh, Deniese! I really adore this. Just like Megan has said, you have such a way with the banter - and the dialogue only bit at the start... had me grinning like a loon! If I quoted what I loved about it I'd be quoting it all! But that image of what wasn't going on but was only inferred... was very hot indeed. ;o) God, that whole part with Dom looking at Matt and what he thinks, and then asking him to be held tighter? GAH! *melts inside* XD
And then the second half - have to agree with hopetomany the Queen size bed bit was genius - and I bet Dom chose that. Lol.
But what I love most about your writing (and this is really strong in Seventeen Steps &hearts) is the fact that it's always so emotionally true. It's always about the depth between them, about the whole... connection there. It's just lovely. So lovely. That's what I love. ♥
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Date: 2010-01-18 07:44 am (UTC)And then the second half - have to agree with
But what I love most about your writing (and this is really strong in Seventeen Steps &hearts) is the fact that it's always so emotionally true. It's always about the depth between them, about the whole... connection there. It's just lovely. So lovely. That's what I love. ♥
Thank you so much for writing these.