ext_177827 ([identity profile] ophelia1971.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] million_star 2009-09-19 10:01 pm (UTC)

Deniese, this is fantastic!

Being a cat lover, I just kept nodding and thinking "Yep, my cat does that" or "My cat acts just like that" etc.

This bit had me in stitches:

At the doorway he turned back to her and proclaimed with a whisper, "I'm on to you." To emphasize his stance he pointed one finger sharply in her direction.

She merely blinked at him. Game on, my friend.


And one of the best lines ever (poor Dom)

"[...]cockblocked by a fucking cat."

PRICELESS! Hahahaha.

I laughed through the whole thing. Thanks for writing something different, and so funny!

*hugs* xxx

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