I had to re-read the whole thing because this has been one of my favourite pwps ever, and yknow, it deserves a proper reading. It's got every kink ever. Proper nipple action, vibrator, red!Matt, dom!Dom, the list goes on.
ARMPITS
i just remembered the armpits
ANYWAY. Yeah this was a perfect end. I think half of what I love so much about your writing is that you get the dialogue spot on. You know sometimes when you're reading, and there's a line of speech that doesn't quite sit right, and it throws you off? I don't think I've ever had that with something you've written; every line fits to the point where I can always hear them saying it in my mind. EVEN DOM'S CAVEMAN VOICE. Christ I honestly did an out-loud giggle at that.
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Date: 2012-09-28 02:33 am (UTC)I had to re-read the whole thing because this has been one of my favourite pwps ever, and yknow, it deserves a proper reading. It's got every kink ever. Proper nipple action, vibrator, red!Matt, dom!Dom, the list goes on.
ARMPITS
i just remembered the armpits
ANYWAY. Yeah this was a perfect end. I think half of what I love so much about your writing is that you get the dialogue spot on. You know sometimes when you're reading, and there's a line of speech that doesn't quite sit right, and it throws you off? I don't think I've ever had that with something you've written; every line fits to the point where I can always hear them saying it in my mind. EVEN DOM'S CAVEMAN VOICE. Christ I honestly did an out-loud giggle at that.
You win the everything <3