I don't know what made your nervous about this chapter. It was everything I had hoped for. EVERYTHING! I just cannot find the words to say how very gorgeous this was. Seriously, you have an uncanny ability to mix sex with sweetness and tenderness. It was all filthy, yes, but the intimacy that was there was just...Gah! Everything was so detailed and the descriptions were so vivid. Right from the waistcoat to sex. But the genuineness in Matthew's voice just blew me away.
Dominic was a special treat, wasn't he? Matthew's nervousness was but natural. But Dominic, the sexy beast, was just a doll! You write these two so very well. And the second time was juts perfect! Everything was just so perfect.
I wish I could quote more but I have to run to college. But this...
I know, I fucking know that this isn't just your run-of-the-mill orgasm.
It's the happiness that exists in tandem with it; that's what makes it special.
...was my most favourite line of all! Those words are actually a fact!
This was stunning and so are you. You have nothing to doubt or worry about with your later chapters or anything that you write. Stay awesome, D! *hugs very tight* ♥
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I don't know what made your nervous about this chapter. It was everything I had hoped for. EVERYTHING! I just cannot find the words to say how very gorgeous this was. Seriously, you have an uncanny ability to mix sex with sweetness and tenderness. It was all filthy, yes, but the intimacy that was there was just...Gah! Everything was so detailed and the descriptions were so vivid. Right from the waistcoat to sex. But the genuineness in Matthew's voice just blew me away.
Dominic was a special treat, wasn't he? Matthew's nervousness was but natural. But Dominic, the sexy beast, was just a doll! You write these two so very well. And the second time was juts perfect! Everything was just so perfect.
I wish I could quote more but I have to run to college. But this...
I know, I fucking know that this isn't just your run-of-the-mill orgasm.
It's the happiness that exists in tandem with it; that's what makes it special.
...was my most favourite line of all! Those words are actually a fact!
This was stunning and so are you. You have nothing to doubt or worry about with your later chapters or anything that you write. Stay awesome, D! *hugs very tight* ♥