ext_41858 ([identity profile] theyellow-daisy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] million_star 2010-07-16 05:23 pm (UTC)

I love those veins and I know you do too, but they're fascinating to me! I say this, because I feel like there were too important parts to this story, Matthew's veins that I think were for whatever reason were meaningful to him, but his intense want for Dom. I*shrug* Maybe I didn't have a point, but I liked the two different points you were made in this one story.

And I was all set to leave a comment until I came to the end, and this:
The stains are running down his arm, across his underarm and down his chest

Can't tell you why, but that line is beautiful and lovely and all kinds of good things to me!

Thank you for this. <3


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