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2010-07-16 12:55 pm (UTC)
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Oh good GOD.
I can't even... holy fuck...
*composes self*
You know you're reading something truly, amazingly hot when you find yourself taking deep breaths and sighing at intervals throughout. Gah.
I loved that you used present-tense for this fic. It really captures the moment and makes the urgency of release more palpable.
My absolute favorite part:
When he finally comes white mingles with black across his hand and forearm, color bleeding into color as it drips onto the chair.
Couldn't even handle the pure, explosively sexy quality of that line. I had to read it over and over... good lord - the image!
This was fantastic. You're fantastic! <3
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no subject
I can't even... holy fuck...
*composes self*
You know you're reading something truly, amazingly hot when you find yourself taking deep breaths and sighing at intervals throughout. Gah.
I loved that you used present-tense for this fic. It really captures the moment and makes the urgency of release more palpable.
My absolute favorite part:
When he finally comes white mingles with black across his hand and forearm, color bleeding into color as it drips onto the chair.
Couldn't even handle the pure, explosively sexy quality of that line. I had to read it over and over... good lord - the image!
This was fantastic. You're fantastic! <3