http://dolce-piccante.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dolce-piccante.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] million_star 2010-07-12 08:20 am (UTC)

awww daddy's day with the SS gang! <3 i love how in the beginning of the chapter, matt mentions his fears about having all these wonderful new people in his life and being afraid of losing them. then you zoned in on each person thoughout the chapter and showed the reader just how much they love matt and care for him. especially dom's talk with his dad. just wonderful!

i agree about paige-like people. i wish i could be the kind of person who is able to be so welcoming and easy going all the time. paige is a truly admirable character <3

and this:

"I want to lie here at night and be able to smell you on my pillow," he continued, pulling Matthew further into the room by his belt loops, the brunet's arms around his neck. "To close my eyes and remember the sounds you make when you come in my bed."

GUH. smells and pillows and coming in bed and GUH. <3333

love this! am so happy you updated! :D

*glee!*

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