Date: 2010-07-11 06:14 am (UTC)
"Mine," he gasped, before collapsing against his prince for the second time, Matthew's body feeling more like home than ever before.

BEAUTIFUL. you know, i like a dirty, filthy sex scene as much as anybody else, but nothing shivers my timbers like a scene such as this one. there's something so inherently sexy about their easy pace and deliberation, it really emphasizes the fact that they're in love with one another. sex doesn't always have to be about getting off, and this is proof. (the preceding dialogue was just lovely, too - i confess my stomach flip-flopped a bit when dom said they'd never made love in his bed, oh.)

and dom being all protective of matt in the second section? oh, my heart. i really do hope george holds up his end of the bargain.

lovely work, deniese - looking forward to the next chapter. :3
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